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Friday, 22 September 2017

that was summer

Remember that silent sound remember the noisy cicadas that was summer. Remember the shady big tree that we sat under remember the pile of leave that we jumped in that was summer that. Remember hot sun on our backs remember that sunburn on my back that was summer. Remember that rough tree that we were scratching are souse That was summer. Remember the air on are face remember the big flower that summer. Remember that freezing ice cream that gave me a brain freeze remember nice cool pool that we jumped into that was summer.
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  1. Mr Ward22 September 2017 at 13:17

    Hi Chris,

    That is a very descriptive piece of writing, I think you have captured Summer very well. What did you have to remember to include during that activity?

    Mr Ward

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